Thursday 15 September 2011

New Fanfic (HOPEFULLY FOR THE LAST *BLEEP* TIME)


 The General ,Garret, looked over the burning village from a hilltop.he signaled his men to search the village for survivors . The strongest of all his men was Arric also known as "Krunch" .He was 6"5 will throbbing muscles and a giant axe, he lifted debris to search for any life .Several minutes later all the survivors had been rounded up,three.A woman , A young girl and an elderly man , they were all weeping and mourning their lost friends and family.Garret faced Krunch who was sharpening his axe.
"All of them?"Krunch merely shrugged
"I cant lift that much debris" there was a large house next to him that was now nothing but mere rubble.
"Then do your thing" Garret averted his gaze from the event about to come.
Krunch pulled his large axe from the ground and started sauntering to the 3 survivors , he slowly pulled it over his head and decapitated the elderly man , this draw screams from the others , Krunch was so strong he didn't have to need a block unlike most executioners , The headless man's corpse oozed blood into the singed grass . The 2 women then started to flee but were then sliced into pieces by the rest of Garret's men .


"Is it done?" Garret had been hiding away from the action he hated having to kill possible threats may jeopardise their army.
"Aye" Krunch had fresh blood on his boots.
"Magic or steel?" 
"Steel"
"I hate this job" he was almost crying but he held the tears back . He had seen too much blood to cry.
"Better to be safe then sorry , I'd prefer not be terrorized by God knows what .
"Aye"

He exited the hut and his men followed his lead as the looked for possible clues as to where the creature may have went . Anders , the least helpful of any of the men though t was wrong to slay men and women because they may have been impregnated by an evil being or may break word of an army terrorizing villages . He thought they were still human . Whilst the others searched for signs Anders was still removing rubble . Till he heard a faint baby's cry.




5 comments:

  1. WHY HAVENT I BEEN ABLE TO SPEAK TO YOU AT ALL FOR THE LAST.... *thinks* uhhhh... AGES!...?!

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  2. Sounds interesting. ^^

    But, just a hint:
    White letters on white ground are a tad difficult to read... =P
    ^^

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  3. not finished yet
    i posted it so i could edit it

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  4. awsome ^^ nice..decapitating pensioners...
    http://orcasage.blogspot.com

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  5. AWESOME KRANE
    Where's the next Part??

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